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Wang Hao slept until three o’clock in the afternoon. He was woken up by someone knocking on the door.
” Who’s there in broad daylight…” Wang Hao walked over and opened the door. He saw four people who looked like porters and was dumbfounded.” What’s going on?”
No wonder he had such an expression.
The four porters at the door carried six cardboard boxes of different sizes. They walked straight in as soon as Wang Hao opened the door.” Mr. Wang, right?” they asked as they walked. Your friend ordered a computer for you and asked us to send it over. May I know where it is?”
”Computer?” ” Is it from that woman?” Wang Hao asked.
This was something that she didn’t want. At least she saved her life, right?
So, Wang Hao led the four of them to the bedroom. The four porters put the boxes on the floor and began to assemble them skillfully. As she assembled it, she introduced it to Wang Hao.
” This is our company’s latest product. It’s a hand-made computer desk for the CEO’s office.”
Wang Hao was even more confused.” That…That…How much is this computer desk?” The CEO used it? It must be quite expensive, right? This set of tables and chairs cost thousands of yuan?
”Sixty-nine thousand yuan,” the porter replied.
Wang Hao was speechless. F * ck, I forgot a zero!
After the computer desk was set up, the movers began to move the computers out. As they moved, they said,” This computer is also the best assembled computer on the market. It’s all assembled with the latest and most high-end components. The case was cooled by water circulation, and the noise was the lowest among all the computers. The display is the latest 36-inch curved display on the market, and the keyboard is also the latest human mechanical keyboard…”
Wang Hao was speechless.
This time, we have to fight for our pride. This set of computers doesn’t look cheap.
”This computer costs twenty thousand yuan?” Wang Hao asked in a low voice.
” This water-cooled case costs 20,000 yuan,” the porter said.” It’s about 80,000 yuan.”
Wang Hao was speechless.
F * ck! Wasn’t this too exaggerated? My original computer, from the case to the monitor to the mouse and keyboard, only costs 3,000 yuan! In the end, in the blink of an eye, he had switched from a shotgun to a cannon! No, no, no, this wasn’t exchanging a bird gun for a cannon. This was exchanging a slingshot for a nuclear bomb!
The movers installed it very quickly. Soon, a full set of tables, chairs, computers, and a computer case was completed. Then, he smiled and said,” Okay, it’s all done. Sir, you can try it.”
Wang Hao pressed the power button in a daze.
After about five seconds…
365 Security Guard: ” Congratulations! Your computer has defeated 99.99% of the users in the country. You are hereby awarded the title of Seven-Star Super Divine Armament!”
Wang Hao was excited! Wang Hao was thrilled! I’ve never touched such an awesome computer in my life!
Sitting on the rosewood computer chair, Wang Hao looked at the huge monitor and couldn’t be more excited.
As a computer enthusiast, what could be more attractive to him than a super divine machine?
After sending off the four porters, Wang Hao quickly took out his phone to reply to the woman’s message. However, as soon as he opened Weixin, he saw the woman’s message.” Do you have more of your novel?”
She watched Battle Through the Heavens?
Wang Hao, who was about to thank her, suddenly pulled his hand back. Now, there was really nothing left in Battle Through the Heavens! There was only the first chapter!
Forget it, I won’t reply first. Let’s see if Sunflower has finished writing the rest of the chapters!
He quickly opened QQ and logged in. Perhaps the car accident today had used up most of his unlucky attribute, so Wang Hao saw Sunflower’s profile picture flashing as soon as he logged in!
Sunflower said,”Ritian brother, I wrote it so well today!” He wrote 15,000 words in one go! It’s so smooth. Ritian brother, help me see how it’s written!”
F * ck! Writing 15,000 words in a day, it couldn’t be any better!
Sunday Wang: ” Okay, don’t worry. Let me take a look first!”
Wang Hao quickly received the file and opened it eagerly.
He had to admit that Sunflower’s writing was perfect. Wang Hao was even sure that Sunflower’s writing was much better than that of many great gods before the Fortune Dice changed the world. However, after reading the ten thousand words, Wang Hao felt like something was missing.
Sunday Wang: ” The plot is the same, and the process is similar. But I feel like something is missing. It just doesn’t feel good.”
Sunflower: No way! Ritian brother, what should we do?”
” Don’t worry,” Sunday Wang said.” I’ll take a look.”
Sunflower: ” Sure, sure, sure. Ritian brother must point out the problem!”
Wang Hao quickly read Sunflower’s part from the beginning. This time, he read it in detail and soon found the problem.
Sunday Wang said, Nalan Yanran’s appearance here isn’t enough! Where was the hatred? How could he feel good if he didn’t set up a foundation and didn’t draw hatred? You have to write down what the consequences will be if the engagement is broken off!”
”Ah?” Sunflower asked. I’ve laid the foundation here!”
Sunday Wang said, I know you’ve laid the foundation, but it’s not enough! Look, who is the main character? Although he was originally a genius, he was now trash, right? Then, is it reasonable for a genius to break off the marriage of a good-for-nothing?”
Sunflower said,”I don’t think so…”
Sunday Wang: ” What do you mean by ‘should’? I didn’t.” Think about it. For example, if you’re an otaku and your family background isn’t outstanding, but the woman is from a family with a family worth hundreds of millions. She’s also good-looking like a celebrity. Is there a problem with her rejecting your marriage? No, right? So, how could he make the readers think that the protagonist was wronged by the annulment of the engagement? That was the most important thing! Only when the readers feel wronged will they feel good about slapping the protagonist in the face!”
Sunflower said,”I’m kneeling before brother Ritian!” What Ritian brother said made sense! Then what should I write here?”
Sunday Wang: ” You have to write down the specific reason for breaking off the engagement and the impact it will have on the protagonist and his father. Why did the female lead come to break off the engagement? Because she was awesome, because she was heavily nurtured by the sect and did not like the main character, so she came to break off the engagement. But this wasn’t enough. Look, what kind of occasion was this? This was a clan meeting. If the son of the clan leader was publicly called off, would he still be the clan leader? Right? Also, how did Nalan Yanran come this time? He came with a tall, rich, and handsome man! This was simply a demonstration! It was used to compare with the main character! You have to portray this tall, rich, and handsome image! Look at you now. This tall, rich, and handsome guy doesn’t even have a sense of existence! Why would a tall, rich, and handsome man with no sense of existence pull any hatred?”
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LeadRee[Translator]
Thank you very much for reading my translations.